Thats a really great poem makes me want to go outsid eand enjoy the rest of ther warmth befor winter comes but back on point nice work on your discriptive words makes me part of the story

Hey ! this poem is lovely... i always admire ppl who write nature poems...
this is one of the loveliest i've read on the site...
good work
5/5
amy

Kinda wierd...lol but i really like it! lol 5/5 deffinately!
Becky
xoxo

Very well written...original idea...and thanks for your help with my flow.

Great job, not many people can write a poem about nature and have it turn out so well.

I like it! It is very descriptive! :) Great job! 5/5

I loved it, it was so good.