I love the ending! Don't get me wrong, the entire piece is delightful, but the last stanza is breathtaking~Holly

Oh that is such beautiful, stirring writing. You are obviously very gifted at conveying emotional feelings about nature. I love short poems that say so much.

I put you in favorites, Gary. Love reading your poetry.

An inspiring message to uplift especially for the hopeless people who think miracles dont happen anymore. In fact, everyday there's a miracle...we just take it for granted...that everyday we still breathe. Good use of metaphors here Gary, nice write as usual...Excellent rate, for the nth time. Ur poems do inspire, u have the power to wake up the sleeping souls for a nice brighter morning...a brighter view, a life of contentment than complaints. Thanks for sharing....cynthia

Beautiful words - they match the unfolding of the dawn so perfectly. great work (as usual!!!)

good luck