Powerful piece, very,very nice!!!

Wow.This piece really hits you.The emotion and imagery are great but so tragic and sad, yet with a glimmer of hope at the end.Well written in both form and content.

Erely, I tried to find the right things to say after reading your poem, but i can't find words. really strong and powerful just don't do it. I wish you the best!

Your words really touched me down to the soul. I am so very sorry for your rough times, and you and your hubby will be in my prayers. I hope that your writing is as therapeutic to you as my writing is to me. Truly, bearing the soul lightens the burden. God bless!