Love is a many splintered thing

by RainbowSlider   Oct 2, 2005


I tried to touch your petals
but was pricked by your thorns.
Your fragrance was fresh
and you was so fair.
I tried feel your heart
but my fingers came back frostbitten.
I offered you my heart
and you asked your friends if they
would like it medium or rare.
Your beauty possessed me
and you acted if you didn't care.
I looked into your eyes
and could not see my reflection
but a blank glare.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ntv650

    Hey, I've noticed how many of my poems you have read and commented on. Wanted to thank you for that. Also, I think you have some fabulous stuff. Has the thought of letting a few publishers look at your work ever crossed your mind? I like the anecdotal value of this poem and the expressions you used, whether similies or metaphors it seem's you've got imagery cracked! Lots of love and respect, Tom

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This caught my attention because the title is the first line in my own poem, Eden Quest-I love the play on well known sayings.(though in line 4 you may want to change 'was' to 'were')This has some very unique phrasings that work so well.This piece says a lot.I especially like the ending.Great poem

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