by TheDevilHimself Oct 2, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Voices in my head |
by tinkerbell
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Hey i love the poem |
by Tiny Reader
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This has some good ideas in it, but you don't get them across in the best way because the rhyme scheme changes from stanza to stanza and the rhythm isn't very consistent. I think it could do with some work. |
by amelia
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Thius poem sent a chill down my spine... |
by PassingAngel
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Omg. i love this poem!! it's so awesome. i have a few like that. but it's about imaginary shtuff..lol. anyways. 5/5 good job. =] |
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Not my type of poem but it's still a good poem |