Tht was so cool and dark, i totally loved it. ur a g8 poet rik. keep it up
becca x

Wow ...great poem...a bit sad but great...keep it up

Likey likey ryt anywayz great poem again rik. why is it that you alwayz have good poems your prob the only person with the best poems the nicest and that there so good mabey should become a poet that would be awsome if you did so cool but anywayz i rate this 5/5 great very good better then me better then any other poems i have read but anywayz.

Bye
XxX Corinne

I mean by in better then in any poems i have read like in other people not your poems wateva im lost right now

Thats reeally good !!

GREAT JOB !!

5/5

That's a good poem, Rik! Awesome job. You described it well!
~BJ~

Hey Rik,
Really good poem....I kinda worry when I read things like this, but it's a great poem. Take care of yourself and keep it up. 5/5 ^_^ Whenever you feel sad, just give a smile to your life. Nice poem, hope to read more soon.

This is really good Rik, Keep it up. Amiath xo

Wow

Great job
-love Ash

Wow that was good keep up the good work!

I love this poem keep up the great work*steals ur katana*u got a 5/5 from me hunnie

Not my type of poem but it's still a good poem

Omg. i love this poem!! it's so awesome. i have a few like that. but it's about imaginary shtuff..lol. anyways. 5/5 good job. =]
-P.A.

Thius poem sent a chill down my spine...
i see u have many poems... i'll add u to my favs now & read more later...
pls read my poems "murder or suicide": & "love is where u are"
:-)
love
amy

This has some good ideas in it, but you don't get them across in the best way because the rhyme scheme changes from stanza to stanza and the rhythm isn't very consistent. I think it could do with some work.

Hey i love the poem