by RainbowSlider Oct 2, 2005
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Life, society /
other
Mea Culpa be with me. |
I like the repitition of Mea Culpa amd an excellent rhyme scheme--the whole piece just flows so smoothly.Very impressive and deep for what appears so simply wrote, it's easy to overlook the skill with which it was created.Mea Culpa, being latin for 'I am to blame' really gives it a deeper twist, a different meaning.Really excellent use of that phrase with the rest of each line.Great piece. |