by RainbowSlider Oct 2, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Fireflies flickering |
As a mainly late night writer, I can really appreciate and relate to this.Again, your images are simply wonderful, you paint such a vivid picture of everything you describe, there are so many great lines.This flows beautifully, is well constructed and is an excellent poem, both in content and form. |