I think you meant to write.. find someone to make me WHOLE....
yes lady all of still looking ..
i dont see anyone who's found that person :( atleast i havent
nice poem
gave u 5/5
pls read "murder or suicide"
thanks

I think this got your feelings out well and thats what you were aiming for but the flow could us a little work to make it easier to read.
A little work could go wonders..good work.

x)

This peom makes me think of the quote' It is always darkest before the dawn'. I can really relate to the part about how love makes you feel... great poem

This is nothing too out of the ordinary, but I did feel a lot of emotion in this piece. One of the stanzas I thought was particularly original has a couple of mistakes.
This stanza "I don't know why.
There is no stories to be told.
about losses to great to behold.
There`s just me."
With the mistakes corrected should be,
"I don't know why.
There are no stories to be told.
about losses too great to behold.
There`s just me."
If that is corrected this poem will be great.
Thanks for sharing.

Wow lots a feeling into that one, great write I can relate I found somone finally but yea I;m looking forward to reading more or ur poetry , keep it up

I get this. i love it its great. sometimes the flow was off, i think it would have been better if you had kept the format consistent but i really loved the idea behind this poem great job

You will find someone again. I hope you can find something in the meantime to make you smile and laugh...if you truly can't anymore, it sounds like depression. Have hope things will get better and you will find love again. You have plenty of time.

Good work :)

xxx