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by Anthony Oct 2, 2005 category : Love, romance / desired love
They say that we're different They say that we're strange. They want us to be like them, But it's they that can't change. Why can't the love That they see in our eyes Be enough for them to stop Their twisted little lies? Forced to stay in hiding We do what most would do Our lips touch gently You love me, I love you. We lay there never moving Inside each other's arms. Your head listens to my heartbeat, There's a cuteness in your charms. Now there's something wrong, Nothing is as it seems. I'm tired of this happening. You're just a woman of my dreams...
by Atomic
Nice! Here's a serious critique.. "The say that we're strange." I'm sure you meant "they" And the first stanza: "They say that we're different The say that we're strange. They want us to be like them, But it's they that can't change.' Was alright, but it didn't flow as nicely in the last two lines. However, I enjoyed it, so kudos to you! ( )_( ) (='.'=) (")-(") Arrivederci!