Hey thanks for your comment on my peom. Think this is my favourite one of yours. I really felt it from the very begining with the opening line. Have to be honest and say that i wasnt sure bout the last 2lines the first time i read it, i can see where you coming from but it seemed to ruin the flow a bit. It is very good, you shouldnt critisise yourself at the bottom of the poem like that though! x

I hope no guy has hurt you, because they are not worth the trouble!! Take it from someone who knows. Keep writing!!

I liked this poem alot...i like how you write what you feel. keep on writing...i look forward to reading some more of your work soon.

This is a totally awsome poem. If this is bad work for you you are definatly a great poet. Heck I know this I've been reading like all of your works and you totally rock.

Aw i love how you wrote this ... 5/5 crissie