An enchanted box

by katie!   Oct 2, 2005


I hear it, that precious sound, floating to mine ears
Like a sparrow caught upon the morning breeze
Thou hath mine heart in an enchanted box
Where mine happiness resides with perfect ease

Herein, I lie beneath the oaks with my love
Her heart beats softly within mine eyes
Thine hair so divine flows gently in the wind
As I keep with the angels whilst the tradegy doth cry

Soothe mine soul with thine honey covered voice
Bitter sweet pain rips each of mine eyes apart
Within that decorated box, enchanted with ages
Lies mine agonies each unrequited hour of mine heart

An angel has cometh, to mine aid, for mine love
Though her winged form be sooted and blood stained
Thine voice sharing times where thou hath faced the worst
When we art together I ponder on thine hidden pain

An enchanted box lies beneath the breath of the beast
Wherein I lay mine body down to eternal rest
Speaketh within each treachourous hour love
As many arrows pierce mine elven breast

Farewell to thee, mine time hath come
Therein lies each day where mine heart was lost
For thou hold'st mine life within thy golden hands
At peace forever within an enchanted box

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I really love that poem, i cant put words to how it made me feel but it was just lovely. keep it up
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful poem... 5/5
    lovely
    very well written
    love
    amy
    pls read murder or suicide
    i'd love ur comments

  • 18 years ago

    by jello

    This is really good! it's well written...keep up the good writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I love how you used words that you don't really see anymore. I was confused a bit in the middle but everything cleared up by the end of your poem. It gave off this really vivid imagery to me *Good thing sometimes to have an overreactive imagination* It was one of the better poems that I read in the love section mainly because it tells more of a story then anything else.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh Katie thispoem was so well written. I loved your use of words and it creates an emotional feel. I wish Ihad some like this in my life.
    I can see why this would be your all time favorite...this is one of my favorites tha I have read.
    I am really glad you decidsed to share thispoem with me...it gives me hope!
    5/5 Girl awesome Job!