by katie! Oct 2, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I hear it, that precious sound, floating to mine ears |
by Tara Kay
I really love that poem, i cant put words to how it made me feel but it was just lovely. keep it up |
by amelia
Beautiful poem... 5/5 |
by jello
This is really good! it's well written...keep up the good writing |
by Kaylee
I love how you used words that you don't really see anymore. I was confused a bit in the middle but everything cleared up by the end of your poem. It gave off this really vivid imagery to me *Good thing sometimes to have an overreactive imagination* It was one of the better poems that I read in the love section mainly because it tells more of a story then anything else. |
by Laura
Oh Katie thispoem was so well written. I loved your use of words and it creates an emotional feel. I wish Ihad some like this in my life. |