Can't wait until i get to read the finished product because so far it's great! just tell me when and i will certainly read the rest!

~Jacklyn

Wow...that poem is beautiful!
The word usage is great, the flow was consistant and wow...
I really loved this poem..it is so beautiful, the most beautiful one I read! well done.

Great poem..and once again wow...i am truly speechless :(

x)

Wonderfully exquisite, great job!!!

A strange kind of beauty, but I liked the scenery.

Good Writing!
beth

Aww now that i got to read the rest of the poem it's wonderful! beautifully done which you hear fromme all the time but it's always true with you poetry!

"An angel has cometh, to mine aid, for mine love
Though her winged form be sooted and blood stained
Thine voice sharing times where thou hath faced the worst
When we art together I ponder on thine hidden pain" love those lines! keep up the awesome work and never stop writing!

~Jacklyn

God! And you're 15 you say? I was surprised. I even told me friends to come over to read this poem, they were surprised too.

I heart your usage of words. Unbelievable!=)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

The way you write this is just so beautiful! 5/5

Incredible poem,
it really is.

xxx

Wonderful write!! An amazing choice of words. Such a tranquil poem. Good work :)

Great job i love it

Once again very beautiful poem...I love, love poems...and your's was really really good....

Absoloutely lovely personifications here. So beautiful but so sad I get the impression that your box is almost like your cage, trapping your heart but it really is amazing work

Sondos

This is so great. i love it!

I thought I'd left a comment on this one before, but I guess I didn't...... I love this write...... its sad, yet beautiful..... I love the way you've written it...... you have a wonderful talent Katie. Keep writing!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Oh Katie thispoem was so well written. I loved your use of words and it creates an emotional feel. I wish Ihad some like this in my life.
I can see why this would be your all time favorite...this is one of my favorites tha I have read.
I am really glad you decidsed to share thispoem with me...it gives me hope!
5/5 Girl awesome Job!

I love how you used words that you don't really see anymore. I was confused a bit in the middle but everything cleared up by the end of your poem. It gave off this really vivid imagery to me *Good thing sometimes to have an overreactive imagination* It was one of the better poems that I read in the love section mainly because it tells more of a story then anything else.

This is really good! it's well written...keep up the good writing

Beautiful poem... 5/5
lovely
very well written
love
amy
pls read murder or suicide
i'd love ur comments

I really love that poem, i cant put words to how it made me feel but it was just lovely. keep it up
xxxxxxx