Prove it to me.

by Jacqui Armstrong   Oct 2, 2005


This time I thought it was right,
Even if it wasn't love at first sight.
I fell for you and hoped to be caught,
But is this relationship what I thought?

You let your friends take control,
And pull you into their little hole.
They talk about me in front of you,
Nothing they say is even true.

What they say you may ignore,
But it doesn't feel the same as before.
You don't stop what they are saying,
You say to me they are only playing.

When they call me all those names,
Mess about and play their stupid games.
You ignore them and leave them be,
My discomfort you cannot see.

They are already pulling us apart,
Stand up to them try to be smart.
Don't just say you care, prove it to me,
Stand up to your friends and let me see.

This time I thought it was right,
Even if it wasn't love at first sight.
Prove this relationship is more than I see,
Hold out your arms, and catch me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Aww hun. Guys can be so freakin stupid some times.. Obviousely you know what I mean. Great job and it's full of emotion... Keep writing hun!

  • 19 years ago

    by firexflys

    Wow your amazing i love this poem so much it's like you know just how i feel lol.. well keep up the amazing work you have such a gift i hope to be as good as you one day 5.5

  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    That was reli gud.. funny how u always end up either falling from a grip or falling and wanting to be caught.. i hope tings r ok.. powerful topic, wonderful rhyme and it flowed very well
    keep it up
    Nannoush

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    Excellently written with a powerful emotion, and nice diction. Well done! The structure is also very efficient. Very inspiring indeed.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Great poem, really inspiring and well written. Good job, keep it up and wish I could write like you...Take care 5/5