Great poem, really inspiring and well written. Good job, keep it up and wish I could write like you...Take care 5/5

Excellently written with a powerful emotion, and nice diction. Well done! The structure is also very efficient. Very inspiring indeed.

That was reli gud.. funny how u always end up either falling from a grip or falling and wanting to be caught.. i hope tings r ok.. powerful topic, wonderful rhyme and it flowed very well
keep it up
Nannoush

Wow your amazing i love this poem so much it's like you know just how i feel lol.. well keep up the amazing work you have such a gift i hope to be as good as you one day 5.5

Aww hun. Guys can be so freakin stupid some times.. Obviousely you know what I mean. Great job and it's full of emotion... Keep writing hun!