Dont have a title.. any suggestions?

by sarah k   Oct 2, 2005


A lonely feeling when you're standing in a crowd
A shivering silence when you're screaming out loud
A surge of happiness when you're cutting your wrist
A relaxing feeling when you're clenching your fist
A blinding light when you're beginning to die
An evil smile when you're beginning to cry
A broken heart when you're falling in love
Talking to Satan when you're looking above
A feeling of normality as the depression sets in
Beginning to hope when you know you won't win

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  • 17 years ago

    by W0rld 0f t3ars

    Oh wow. I love the poem. Very dramatic and fierce. I think you should call it..."The demon within." Hope you like it...comment my newest poem. I can use your opinion =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jodie

    SAAAAARAH! Hey, you\'re the most amazzzzzzzing poet I have ever met! We were writing these poem books in class, and my teacher said if you had any poets you idolized, to put them in there, and write their name down, and the first name that came to mind was yours! Then I was going to, but then Jordan came up to me and was all like, \"Hey Jodie, can you get me Sarah\'s poems?\" And I was like, \"Sure!\".. Biattcchhh. Oh well, next time I will! Anyways, Life is wonderful, these poems are wonderful, you are wonderful! I love you! Bye!

  • 18 years ago

    by Matt

    Like your poem :)...shame its sad eh :( its also a shame i no exactly how those words feel. Keep writin.

    MaTt

  • 19 years ago

    by My tormented little heart

    I have an idea of a title..."Euphoric Dysphoria" LOL just a suggestion :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Nikki

    I wouldnt know what to call it.. buts it pretty good ...

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