YOU'RE FRICKEN AMAZING... all your poems are so good =( I wish mine were as good as yours! goooooood job... 5/5 for sure!! =D

*Heidi

Very nice poem.

Awwwwwwww sweets i know that you dont have a dad and im sorry....I know i could never heal all of your pain im gonna try though....Im sorry..Whatever you do please dont leave me....Dont give up on me like everyone else has......Stay strong and Dont leave me......I love you with all of my heart and soul....i love you byebye

~Mallory

OMG....this poem left me breathless babe, it was so awesome. I can totally relate, I don't have a dad, but my friends do...all I have is my stepdad, but from all the things I've told u about him I know you agree with me that he doesnt count. n-e-wayz 5/5...keep it up Sw33tS!!!!!
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-elizabeth-

Very good and straight to the point. Its good but you forgot a word. Besides that, its perfect.

Wow *speechless* tht was so totally kwl. ur a g8 poet hun! keep it up!
becca x

That's a great poem Jessica. Very well written. Very well expressed. I can feel the sadness flowing in the words, the pain, the anguish. All of the words seem to blend together like the three flavors of 'Fruit Twistable'... Okay, bad example... But I think you know what I mean. Fantastic poem.

Without wax,
Seth

This comment is for 'Memories':
Goddammit. I can't stop crying. This poem really touched me. I have so many memories like that with the friends that used to live here(where I live) The best times in my life. The best time in yours... Very well-written. Fantastic peice of work. Keep up the good work.

Without wax,
Seth

Wow..you commented on my poem Fake Smiles and Stupid Lies so I'd like to say thank ya..this poem was great. I would say more love..but my school isn't exactly happy I'm not doing work on the comp.."you should be doing this at home Mr. Summers" blah..lol. Randomness..comment on my poems at any time and maybe I can give you a better opinion.

This goes many places in one poem.
Some parts just don't fit.
And you type i alot...forgot shift?
Anyways, besides the fact you get side tracked from whatever the main topic is in this poem.
I have to go with a 3/5

This is a great poem, It explains so much and It discribed so well, its very sad..
Im sorry you never knew your dad, But this poem takes a window into your soul!
Its excellent!
Keep it up your a great writer x)

O-m-g this poem and almost all of ur others speak to me i love them!!they come truly from the heart bea-utiful!! love ya like i know ya!!jessica (me)

Although i haven't experienced what you've experienced i can say that it really is an excellent piece. but setting aside the experience aspect, the poem did not touch my heart that deeply. i wish you had elaborated more of what you really feel... 5/5

Aww...Jess, I never would have guessed that you had such emotions bottled up inside of you. I'm so, so, so sorry that you never got to know you're dad, but I just wanted you to know that you've become a beautiful person even without him. I hope that made sense. Great poem but I wish that you would have made it a little longer with a little more elaboration. Awesome work! 5/5

TAKE CARE-
stargazer38

I dont care what anyone says about this poem.... Its great. Really expressed how you felt and what a lot of people go through... I LOVE YOU JESSICA!!! Lol i havent talked to you in forever but atleast you're still writing which is awesome...5/5... TTYL Bye

(I finally got a new poem... kind of by accident but its up there so check it out if you get the chance.)

I like it! ill probly b on at like 5:30 california time if ur in that chat ^_^