Just another poem

by Andrea broken tears   Oct 2, 2005


It's pouring outside
tears are falling
from his eyes.

Bruises on his body
and cuts
on his wrists.

He picked up
the knife
and tried to end
the pain.

He forgot
about the one
that loves him
when he picked up
the knife that day.

His girl walked
in on him
and found him
on the floor.

So she picked
up the same knife
and ended her life
beside him.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww that's sad..like even disturbing sad..
    u guys must really love each other..please don't hurt urself..
    take care x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    I know your sad and down gurl..an di know you want to write about your feelings but please write me just one happy poem..about that happy girl that is deep inside of you

    love ya
    -angel-

  • 19 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Good poem

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