I loved the line "Maybe I said things wrong, like one of those sad songs."
That was really, really deep, and touching.
Great poem, keep on writing!
good luck

Very good that was a very good line "maybe i said things wrong,like one of those sad songs"that was cool and thanks for your comments they mean alot to me 5/5

This is cute i like how you repeated things twice in a row i think it gave it more power and emotion i think this poems shows your frustration and how much you want him and dont really good job

Awww i love it!! 5/5 for sure
Becky
xoxo