Awww tht is so good but sad.. im sorry about wut happened.. ur a great writer.. keep goin to could get somewhere with tht stuff! i kno u may not think so now but tht is really deep and i hope everything works out for u..

Wow...this is an awsome poem! even if u think u should quit then there at tht time...well u shouldn't cause God will lead u thruogh everything later in life! so keep tryin! my e-mail addy is "auntkimmy04@hotmail.com"

Thanks for commenting on my poems. It doesn't take rhyming to be a good poem. I had to come back and look at some more of your poems so now I am adding you to my favorites. Keep up the good work. I really liked this poem as well.