VERY GOOD FOR BEING THE FIRST POEM. PLEASE CONTINUE

Hey! I have a poem somewhat like this, and I know how it feels so connecting to it wasn't a problem. It's really good poem... I know this may sound weird, but I'm almost positive i've talked to you before lol, anyway - point to this post was just to say good job!!!

I liked this one. It was short but it still said a lot. :) *5/5*

Nice, not too deep - but not at all shallow. The words were well chosen. I thought I'd comment on your poem you submitted first, because rarely anyone comments on my oldest poems, and it's nice when you get the odd comment on a poem even you haven't read for a while! Great work - you have improved a lot from this piece, though thats not to say this piece is in any way, shape or form bad!

Peace. [Sole]

You're writing has certainly changed, its amazing to see how far you've come.
Although this is much better then my first submission that i deleted, lol
love
~Em

Short, but very effective. your point comes across well.. Nice work!

I scrolled right down to see your very first poem, having read a couple of crackers. You have come a long way since this, but this is far from being poor. It just doesn't have a very good flow to it, despite sending a clear message in very few words.