I think its a really good poem... i hope ur alright hun
luv always smiling oxoxo

Great poem i loved it. keep writing

Gr8 poem! itz rilly gud! :)) datz exactly how i feel at da mo.. lol.. im in love wit some1 hu doesn't love me.. sad, i kno :P lol.. newayzz! don b sad! n keep smiling!
luff ya! jessy

Really good i feel your pain