So close to tears
meaningful
beautiful
well done baby
xxx

Very touching and brought tears to my eyes, well done....I'm kinda speechless, don't know what to say.....Excellent!!!

*Hugs sabrina*

Good one

That is very sad. but I got the whole, deep feeling in your simple words.

Good Writing!
beth

That's quite upsetting..reminds me of when hannah lost her baby...

I was readin thru ur poems N i thought dey were really good and den i read dis 1 and i jus thought wow. Dis is an amazin poem, you captured the emotions and mood perfectly and it was beautifully worded.
Bethan xxx