Drew, I like this, can't put my finger on why, but I like it.

I'm not sure what I thought of it but I did kind of liked it.
"emotions manifest into bleeding demons
who hide in the nerve enriched soil,
and at any sign of feeling, recoil"
Those were my favorite lines though I'm not sure why they are. You have a cool way with words.
~Faith

Okay i think this poem held a steady message and a good one up until right here "who hide in the nerve enriched soil,
and at any sign of feeling, recoil
deeper, resulting in not much more then a feeling"

because first of all if the "bleeding demons" are hiding in the "nerve enriched soil" they dont need to draw back or recoil because they are already hiding....and if they hide from feeling how does that create feeling? please explain if i am missing something but that confused me, i loved the first stanza though and if i hadnt taken the time to think about this poem and actually try to understand it, it sounds beautiful your so good with words also though the rhyme scheme was weird i couldnt tell if you were using one or not but that threw me off a little anyways 4/5 good job

Wow! This is awesome! It's so mysterious with intriguing undertones! The imagery and intensity is brilliant! Well done~Holly

I love it, it has a really strong feel of reminiscence and i think its about reflecting on past choices but also feeling that you shouldnt. Great piece keep 'em coming

It is definitely an awesome write, kind of mysterious in a way while recalling memories from the past....... its different, but its true talent. Loved it!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela