Lovers dance

by Sean   Oct 3, 2005


Let the chance of fortune,
Twist and burn in loves
Dance floor and the lights
Oh, the lights.
Whirl as you fall

Break! The leg of luck,
As you tread on her heart, the soul and mind,
Broke the foot, and she falls in your
Love dance. And the beauty,
Falls with your smile gone.

Broke the angel,
Broke the angel for one,
One last dance,
Didn't you?

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  • 17 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Your poems are cool and well written,keep it up :)

  • 19 years ago

    by sophia

    Love your poem lolz nice going :D keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by julie

    Amazing, really emotional i can relate to it, check out my peom phantom kisses, and see what you think,
    Love and peace
    julie
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Beautiful. Sweet, but I sensed much sorrow, too. A bit of a juxtaposition. I really enjoyed it, sorry my comment is so lame.

  • 19 years ago

    by christina marie

    Wwwwoooooowwwwww, i didn't really understand it.......but i liked it! it has a deep meaninig (i think), but i just gotta find it first, lol, 5/5. (sorry for being kinda dim-witted in this comment ^_^)

    ~*Lollipop Sweetie*~

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