Wwwwoooooowwwwww, i didn't really understand it.......but i liked it! it has a deep meaninig (i think), but i just gotta find it first, lol, 5/5. (sorry for being kinda dim-witted in this comment ^_^)

~*Lollipop Sweetie*~

Beautiful. Sweet, but I sensed much sorrow, too. A bit of a juxtaposition. I really enjoyed it, sorry my comment is so lame.

Amazing, really emotional i can relate to it, check out my peom phantom kisses, and see what you think,
Love and peace
julie
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Love your poem lolz nice going :D keep writing

Your poems are cool and well written,keep it up :)