Hey, I really liked it. I'm not sure why you were scored the way you were, i gave you a 5/5 though, simply because it's short it's sweet, it rhymes and it describes your feelings for someone else (or so I think hehe). You're asking for more than what it seems, truthfully I think this poem goes deeper than anyone else realizes. So well done!!!

Thank you steph.........yeah i don't know why people score the way they do but there is nothing i can do about it.......unless you know how to do something about it

erica