The Greatest Moment Ever

by David Paul   Oct 3, 2005


To me the moment that was the best,
Wasn't the moment you told me yes,
It wasn't the sound of your heart with mine,
Not even how our hands met every time.

It wasn't our hugs that lasted forever,
Nor the kisses that brought us closer together,
But the greatest moment, are you ready for it,
Was when I looked in your eyes and realized you are perfect.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Erin

    Wow, that is really great. and very true. i loved it when my bf looked into my eyes, we would sit there for 20 minutes at a time just lookin at each other and he always told me how much he loved me. i loved the poem keep going ur good

  • 19 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww dis so sad but sweet lol... anyway sum1 tld me to read this poem bcoz they sed u where a gwd riter lol
    anyway so i did lol gwd job though
    mwa take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Very sad. Made me cry. Hold me ? :(.
    All in all. Very good to say to a girl that u love so much david B........ I dont know how to spell or say your last name.

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    I wasn't looking forward to reading it because it was so short, but the Hell with it! That was one of the best short poems I have yet to read.

    Kudos to you m'dear.

    I absolutely heart the first stanza.

    Still "lub" me? =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very good poem David.I like it.

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