Very good poem David.I like it.

I wasn't looking forward to reading it because it was so short, but the Hell with it! That was one of the best short poems I have yet to read.

Kudos to you m'dear.

I absolutely heart the first stanza.

Still "lub" me? =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Very sad. Made me cry. Hold me ? :(.
All in all. Very good to say to a girl that u love so much david B........ I dont know how to spell or say your last name.

Aww dis so sad but sweet lol... anyway sum1 tld me to read this poem bcoz they sed u where a gwd riter lol
anyway so i did lol gwd job though
mwa take care

Wow, that is really great. and very true. i loved it when my bf looked into my eyes, we would sit there for 20 minutes at a time just lookin at each other and he always told me how much he loved me. i loved the poem keep going ur good