Stupid Thing

by authum darkness   Oct 3, 2005


As I sit here writing this, a tear runs down my face
How could I be so foolish, thinking he'd leave her for me
How could I be so cruel, wishing he would
I spend my waking hours thinking about him
Everyone knows how I feel
The question is, does he feel the same
A question I am afraid to ask
I fear the answer has a negative result
But I pray that it is positive
As you sit here reading this, think about your love
And all the stupid things you did for him to notice you
As for the one I refer to as "him", if you're reading this
This is one of the stupid thing I did for you to notice me

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  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Its a pretty good poem for free verse, the only thing that didnt quote flow , is the line about positive.... maybe use a different word that means the same thing almost, but that is a little more catchy... i really liked yr unique ending, and how you brought it all togeather.. good job and keep up the good work! please comment on my poems too!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Nice poem, maybe you could space things out better like dont make the lines so long and when you start a new thought start a new line. thanks my thoughts nice job keep it up

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