Nice poem, maybe you could space things out better like dont make the lines so long and when you start a new thought start a new line. thanks my thoughts nice job keep it up

Its a pretty good poem for free verse, the only thing that didnt quote flow , is the line about positive.... maybe use a different word that means the same thing almost, but that is a little more catchy... i really liked yr unique ending, and how you brought it all togeather.. good job and keep up the good work! please comment on my poems too!!!!