by XlovedXuXonceX Oct 3, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Over the wide |
by Amanda
I can definately feel how you want your readers to feel :o) |
by ♥LaUrEn♥
Awwwwww.....i love this poem i reminds me of my ex!!and how i felt when he left me! |
by Ariana
I like your repitition of the last lines of each stanza. They don't sound forced and fit into the poem really nicely. |