Ummm.....I don't know what to say to this exactly. But, Mike's got a good thing going for him....he has you. Sissy, I am so(...I don't know...but it's good....)that you're happy. That puts a GENUINE smile on my face! I LOVE YOU!

Wow, that is an amazing poem. I really loved the flow of it and enjoyed reading it. How did you think of it? Excellent job! Check out my poems! Keep on writing.

I like this one better than the rest cause it is a story carried through fine. The other ones were really similar to each other, lots of repetition, which isn't bad, I just don't prefer it all the time. And the topics you write about I am kind of tired of hearing about because most people write about the same stuff. Try to do something a little different in theme. This was a good story.

Wow that was such a beautiful poem, keep up the good work. it was so beautiful. i loved it.
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