by XxTeArSxX17 Oct 3, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
WAITING |
by James
WOW....thats a very Beautiful poem thats filled with love I know it came from the heart...and I can relate so very much I've been waiting on someone myself I just hope she see's that I'm always here for her no matter what...anyway Excellent job and thank you for the lovely comments :) 5/5 |
I didnt understand this line: |
Aw, this is a really beautiful poem, i like it alot. |
Awww...so sweet and i like that u would wait for that guy for such a long time...i did the same and it worked out for the best....good luck to u...5/5...keep it up |
by Jamie
I loved the first stanza this is a cute poem i think its very sweet the only thing i think it is in need of is that i think you need to tell us why you cant be with him right now...cause now im curoius lol...good job though 5/5 |