Wow, this poem is really sad and very emotional. You can tell your words came from the heart, good job! I think you're a talented writer and could grow to be one of the best...

I'm sorry about your friend, as you can tell by my poem, I've lost someone close to me as well. The good do die young...such a shame...

Anyway, awesome poem! 5/5

Thanks for commenting on my poem
~Much love~
----Kelly----