5/5 i like the part where you say "i hate it all,but it helps the pain", cuz thats how i feel

I'll stand with you! 5/5

Black~Rose

This is a really great poem...i'm gonna read more of yours because you seem to write so much of how i feel too...great job :) i always make myself keep living every day...keep your head up...

I have another poem called killing is a thrill

Wow dude that was amazingly written. flow was good, i loved the short line structure.
5/5