Wow, i really liked that. The emotion can definetly be felt at its strongest. And that last stanza is so sadly beautiful...yet so true. I know what you mean. Beautifully written!

Love this poem!!!!!!!!!

Wow, sparOWW. That was like wow. lol. I agree withall the comments before me! you rock! total inspirations! see you later!
~HamUcita

This is from SlimeCo! Woooooohhhhhh that was sooooooooooooo totaly deep man yeah. U r the best bud ever. Keep writing poems 4 peeps like me. See ya! Wait ur right next 2 me. CHILI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-SlimeCo-
Love ya man