You truely are amazing, Are you from quebec? your french is amazing, I wish i could do that the extent of my french is very limited after 11 years:P

Sh:P Dont rag on me about my vow, all my friends have:P Im try, but these were somethings I needed to write about, and I made that vow before I saw my gran... so im trying but when she passes there will be a few more sad ones as well...>.< I have not will power:P

I love this. I may be rubbish at french (much to my teachers despair) but i know that this is an incredible poem (thanks to the translation!!)
Seriously though, this is a really unique idea and it's really cool. I won't be attempting anything similiar anytime soon though... !!! lol

xxx cici xxx

Wow i love this even though im c r a p at french so thanx for the translation otherwise i wud be lost! gr8 idea though xox

Un poeme fantastique, ma cherie! Excellent job on both the original and the translated versions. I am glad to have come across this unique poem after taking French for seven years. I particularly enjoy the use of imagery and motifs, but the diction is also absolutely fantastic. Well done! Tres bien!

HansRik: merci beaucoup cher monsieur! lol

thank you to everyone!!! your comments mean so much to me :D