by Rusted x Heart Oct 4, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The cool comfort of a blade |
by Kaylee
Beautiful and haunting. I wrote a comment before but it didn't show =[ |
You've got a brilliant talent with words mate! Your flow is amazing and discriptions really paint a metal picture of the scene you're writing about; a sign of a good poet. I loved the contrasting comments about the sun and the moon which were done beautifully. Your poem was an excellent read! |
by Loulou
You amaze me still it is soo gooood |
by Darien
Pretty cool poem. Heh, reminds me of the one I just wrote, has to do with the moon and suicide and stuff. Awesome job. |
by ShadowDancer
It seems there is little i can say that has not been said. once again your poem conjers up the most exquisite images when read. the consept of the moon dieing each night gives the poem a dark edge, and once again your skill with metaphores really takes this poem to the top. |