Wow, that was really awe-inspiring.. i really liked it.. if ya get a chance, check out some of my poems! keep up the great writes.

Wow now that was great I love the images and discriptive words you paint the moon with just awsome

I really love your style of writing, so discriptive its beautiful.

Also the poem you put a link too in the discussion board!

Lv A, x

Wow that was awesome. very good job! tnx so much for your comment.
x0x0 heather

Oo this is really amazing! So refreshing after I just read a bunch of ranting "I hate my life so I have to tell the world" type poems. I love how you used the image of the moon to convey emotion! pure brilliance, 5/5

Wonderful choice of topic. It's just too beautiful for words M'Dear.

I think my favourite part of the whole poem was the poem itself. Job well done!

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

I love this poem. Your style is awesome. Everything flows so well. I love the way you depict everything so it mediphorical yet still very good imagery

Great job! I really liked this poem a lot as well! Omg, you are so good at writing poetry! My favorite stanza was:

"The Moon can't be kept for longer,
it dies as the day it is born, she goes unwanted,
and for one last night she shines over us,
painting all she sees red, for tonight
she bids us adieu as she vanishes into eternal day."

It was just a great ending to a great poem! Good job!
~BJ~

Great ending, and excellent poem! You are very good, keep it up! :)

Completely loved it. Vividly brilliant portrayal, and the perfect choice of words.

Beautiful poem. Make sure to check spelling mistakes, otherwise it's perfect/ Keep it up! :)

Again, the imagery is breath taking.
"piercing the silence with relief"
I loved this line. It's beautiful just like everyone else said. Perfect.

Thats an outstanding poem xxx

It seems there is little i can say that has not been said. once again your poem conjers up the most exquisite images when read. the consept of the moon dieing each night gives the poem a dark edge, and once again your skill with metaphores really takes this poem to the top.
brillient work

Ruby

Pretty cool poem. Heh, reminds me of the one I just wrote, has to do with the moon and suicide and stuff. Awesome job.

You amaze me still it is soo gooood
5/5

You've got a brilliant talent with words mate! Your flow is amazing and discriptions really paint a metal picture of the scene you're writing about; a sign of a good poet. I loved the contrasting comments about the sun and the moon which were done beautifully. Your poem was an excellent read!

-Tainted Mikochan

Beautiful and haunting. I wrote a comment before but it didn't show =[