I don't really understand it, or maybe i didn't read it properly..i like the bits i understood thouhg....

Hm, this poem was okay. I liked how you expressed yourself-but at the end it really didnt flow all together. You know, the ending is one of the best parts of a poem. (Not saying that peoples poems suck)-But its a given. You need to make the start as good as the end. Nice job anyways.

-Jennifer.

Thats more like it on the rhyming side of things, good work

I tyhought i ended too soon.
i enjoyed what was there though.
very intrigued.
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