Going Through Hell..

by KrypticKristen   Oct 4, 2005


Piece by piece
I slowly fall apart
I should have know
That you would break my heart

I can`t seem to get over you
I`ve never felt this way before
But holding on to a one sided love
Hurts so much more

Tears well up in my eyes
I try to hold back
My sorrowful cries
And keep my fake smile on

And trough my fake smile
You can`t see
All of the pain
That consumes me

I thought you would see through
Since you once loved me I thought you could tell
Even though I appear happy
I`m going through hell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Josh

    Wow.... your poem is so beautifully written, I can tell alot of emotion went into it... I love how people use peronal things going on in their lives for inspiration... Check some of my poems out... :)

    Much luv,
    Josh

  • 19 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Being appreciatd by someone like you for my poems makes my work worth tons, firstly thanks a ton for taking up so much of ur time and commenting on most of my poems.....

    this poem of urs is really awesome and its so easy for anyone to relate themselves with these words...and thats what i call the art of poem, making someone enter ur world with ur words so easily....fantastic

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    This is sad... i can feel u...
    there is someone out there who deserves ya more...

    hope u pass by mine, posted in the arms of an angel
    vote and comments much appreciated... much love

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