Argh, as if it was bad. such an amazing poem. i really liked it how you described "friends"... hmm interesting. thats a bum about your other account being deleted. keep on writing and thanks lots for the comment xx

I agree, it's a good poem, quite chilling how you refer to your "friends," i found it really effective the way its like a story (to me anyways) and also the layout changes, it's a big risk to do that sometimes but damn another great poem...5/5, i'm definately adding you to my faves, hope to see some more of your work xxx

That was good..i liked how u represented ur "friendz" as the way u released ur pain-but just out of curiousity, was ur "friendz" a blade, or pillz or sumthin'? cuz that's just what i thought..but great job n-e-wayz tho!