Dancer

by Truest Lies   Oct 4, 2005


Dont talk to me about music,
Or about my feet,
I know theyre not perfect,
But I dont have to be discreet.
If I practice in the center of the classroom,
like a self-appointed queen bee,
Its because no one else does,
And its a choice made by me.

Dont tell me that Im losing,
Ive come pretty far,
If you know that your better,
Why are you worried about me?
Nobodys going to take your place,
No need to make haste,
But dont sit in the corner,
After all youre here to dance,
So get up and move,
Get up and take a chance.

Dont call me pushy,
Im no primadonna,
But Im going to dance now,
So dont stand in my way.
Dont call me excellent,
I dont appreciate the lies,
Flattering and deceit never made me get by.

Just come to see,
when I dance on the stage,
Dont judge my dancing
by my age.
So come along,
About once a month,
Ill be there, practicing the newest steps,
And you can tell me, if Im doing it wrong.

Ill give it my best,
Ive already given it my heart,
And Im sure that thats the most important part.

*a poem about what I feel about dancing flamenco. ---here\'s to amber\'s challenge.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This isn't my favorite poem of yours, but I did like it...Telling how it is to feel like you want to be watched and there was no need to tell you you're the best. I liked that...Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

  • Really nice poem, beautifully written.

    XxX Cici XxX

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Must say, your poems are very inspiring. You are corect, people shouldn't care if they are terrible, if you like it, set out and do it.

    "Flattering and deceit never made me get by."

    Maybe if you use the word "flattery" instead of "flattering".

    How about:

    "Flattery and deceit never gets me by"

    It's just a suggestion.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Thats the first poem i ever read on dance... im a dancer too.. classical, jazz & basic ballet are my kinda dance...
    lovely poem
    reached my soul
    5/5
    lotsa love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    The alst parts my favorite. Good job, I really liked this. I am a dancer and I do a whole bunch of different stuff and this poem was really wonderful. keep it up!