The alst parts my favorite. Good job, I really liked this. I am a dancer and I do a whole bunch of different stuff and this poem was really wonderful. keep it up!

Thats the first poem i ever read on dance... im a dancer too.. classical, jazz & basic ballet are my kinda dance...
lovely poem
reached my soul
5/5
lotsa love
amy

Must say, your poems are very inspiring. You are corect, people shouldn't care if they are terrible, if you like it, set out and do it.

"Flattering and deceit never made me get by."

Maybe if you use the word "flattery" instead of "flattering".

How about:

"Flattery and deceit never gets me by"

It's just a suggestion.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Really nice poem, beautifully written.

XxX Cici XxX

This isn't my favorite poem of yours, but I did like it...Telling how it is to feel like you want to be watched and there was no need to tell you you're the best. I liked that...Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5