The Original Doll (Song)

by Rusted x Heart   Oct 4, 2005


A porcelain doll,
In the window display,
Surrounded by love,
Yet full of dismay.
No one will notice,
As she starts to fray,
Her painted red smile,
May not see another day.

(Chorus)
She lost herself,
In her porcelain dreams,
She's freed herself,
Breaking open her seams,
She wont build herself,
Up to a fall,
Cause she's the original,
(Yea the original)
Cause she's the original-
Original Doll

Her perfect little face,
Tainted with lies,
Longing to break free,
Longing to fly.
No longer keeping bottled,
Everything she hides,
Flaunting it freely,
On the outside.

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
She doesnt need,
To be held up at all,
She'll make it on her own
...The original doll

(Chorus x2)

Cause she's the original,
(Yea the original)
Cause she's the original-
Original Doll

--------------------------------

I wrote this on 20/01/05 based on a rumoured 'title' that was given to a Britney Spears CD. I used the title to help write the lyrics to a song. I had posted the lyrics on a forum and somehow got pased on to various sites claiming these to be the 'official' lyrics. So thats a little amusing story attached to this 'song' /poem.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Another great song 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Once again a great poem or song or whatever. its got such a great idea behind it. maybe try writing music to go with it? exellenct work

    Ruby

  • 19 years ago

    by Ksusha

    Wow Britney Spears actually has some good use. Good lyrics. Im wondering how the music sounds like. Should be really interesting. If you ever get this online recording send me a message.

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Sorry about the double posting, and I forgot to mention, this deserves more than the 3 it has been given.

  • 19 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Oh a very amusing story haha. Anyway, I really liked this song. It's so fluent and one of those that you really want to hear to music and then see on the shelves in music shops. The first stanza or verse was my favourite, and the chorus was brilliant too. In fact, it was all good.
    Only thing, in the first stanza “noone” should be “no one.”
    Very well written, keep it up!