This poem was so good. Seriously. I loved it. I like the way you keep it flowing until the end. You never run off coarse, you always keep it direct. I bet you sprent a lot of time on this one. You deserved the 5. Keep it up.

HEY DUDE AWSOME WRITING SEE IM SPEACH LESS
AND THAT DOSENT HAPPEN ALL THE TIME SEE YA BYE

Excellent poem..My grandma just passed away. It was actually just yesterday. . .* Great way to start off the new year, huh? Passed away on Jan. 1,2006..

Great work. Keep it up

Wow that brought tears to my eyes. I hope you are okay. Great job! 5/5

--chelsea

It sucks when u lose a grandma i know becuase i lost mine