Job well done, M'Dear. =)

I was surprised when it has nothing to do with killers and such since you seem so fond of writing about that.

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Different then the others....but still pretty good...4/5....the flow was a bit off a few places

Eyelashes drenched in tear drops
They tumble down your cheek
You lay and cry for hours
Youd get up but youre so weak
I loved this stanza, it spoke to me the most.

Nice poem, a lot of emotion has been put into this.

XxX Cici XxX

Ive read better from you..but its still pretty good 4/5 keep it up
Becky
xoxo

Wow...this is soooo good i really enjoyed it and i know what u mean by this. 5/5...u really and truly deserved it and keep it up

Interesting poem. Great vocabulary. Keep it up.

Eyelashes drenched in tear drops
They tumble down your cheek
You lay and cry for hours
Youd get up but youre so weak

favorite part. I loved it! You are talented hun! Keeep it up! :) 5/5

Nicely done, i really liked this poem. the emotions and images you used were very well thought out and crafted. Well done! The noly thing I thought wa sodd is...do you mean 'cliché' as opposed to 'clique'?