You've made my life perfect

by Chris Engle   Oct 4, 2005


Several loves had,
And several loves lost,
I was giving up on love,
The pain too high a cost.

But then you entered my life,
And you filled me with mirth.
I thought I was nothing,
But you gave me worth.

You showed me love,
When I needed it the most.
Of which, thats a feat,
That not many can boast.

You stood by my side,
When I needed a friend,
And I know you will be here,
Until the end.

And now we're together,
We're as happy as can be.
You're more than just my girlfriend,
Your everything to me..

I feel so close you to,
I love you soo much,
Close yet so far,
I long to feel your soft touch,

I cant wait for the day,
That I get to be with you,
I constantly think,
Of all that we could do.

I love you Brittany,
you are my life,
and I cannot wait,
until the day you're my wife.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is soo sweet and romantic.. i ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! the flow is perfect and so if the rhyme.. nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Chris, I loved it! And I'm being honest, this was so powerful, full of love and emotion. Really good, it flowed beautifully all the way through.
    You are very talented
    xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Cute and sweet poem. I like it! Though I thought some of the rhymes were quite forced. Overall, a very well-written poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    I'm really not that sure on this poem to be honest. i'm sure you can admit that it's as tired as cliche's come, but that usually makes a poem more relatable. i think some of your rhymes are a little forced, but perhaps that's just a coincidence and i'm making excuses because most poems have forced rhymes. like i said, i'm completely undecided on my opinion of this :]
    the rhythm begun very consistant, but you lost a bit of that fluency toward the end of the poem.
    However, all things aside, it's an admirable thing to write about and is clearly something very personal.
    obviously, you could make some improvements, btu i wouldn't let that stifle your writing. lovely work x

  • 18 years ago

    by forever-tourtured-by-crimson-pain

    This again is a great poem it shows great emotion and how you feel. i love all your poems your a great poet. keep it going loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxx

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