I love it
she will love it!!!

Really awesome...whoever you give this to is really lucky :D

Aww
its really good
it comes to getha nicely
and i m sure it will make her love u more ...if humanly possible...
keep wrighting ..ur doing great

ReNeE
X O X O X O

She is going to love this poem so much, i have tears in my eyes

u truly deserve her

This poem is a true representation of your love and powerful emotions you feel for your beloved. The last rhyme life/wife is already cliched, but you nevertheless managed to develop the poem in a controlled manner. I admire the way in which you used diction and imagery to convey meaning. Well done.

Hello, Chris. Your poem was quite beautiful, and sweet. I usually enjoy them when they are a little more involved and unpredictable, but you managed to write down this one quite well. I hope that, if there is a girl, she has read this.

Good Writing!
beth

This again is a great poem it shows great emotion and how you feel. i love all your poems your a great poet. keep it going loves ya always crimson-pain xxxxxx

I'm really not that sure on this poem to be honest. i'm sure you can admit that it's as tired as cliche's come, but that usually makes a poem more relatable. i think some of your rhymes are a little forced, but perhaps that's just a coincidence and i'm making excuses because most poems have forced rhymes. like i said, i'm completely undecided on my opinion of this :]
the rhythm begun very consistant, but you lost a bit of that fluency toward the end of the poem.
However, all things aside, it's an admirable thing to write about and is clearly something very personal.
obviously, you could make some improvements, btu i wouldn't let that stifle your writing. lovely work x

Cute and sweet poem. I like it! Though I thought some of the rhymes were quite forced. Overall, a very well-written poem!

Chris, I loved it! And I'm being honest, this was so powerful, full of love and emotion. Really good, it flowed beautifully all the way through.
You are very talented
xxxxxxx

Aww.. this is soo sweet and romantic.. i ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! the flow is perfect and so if the rhyme.. nice job!